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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Atem Alchemie
Breathe Right: Nasal BreathingBreathe Right: Nasal Breathing
Breathing for Sleep & Stress
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Nasal Breathing”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Breathing for Sleep & Stress”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “breathing”.
First paragraph is 52 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 54 characters.
2,271 characters.
Enough substance
2,164 characters.
0 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 507 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fix and improvements”
Release notes say something
120 characters of release notes.
10 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
302 MB.
Reasonable download size
205 MB.