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Clear - Skin Tracker & Diary
Skin Health Tracker - MyGlowClear - Skin Tracker & Diary
Acne, Cycle & Trigger Journal
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Skin Tracker & Diary”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “MyGlow”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Acne, Cycle & Trigger Journal”
Has a subtitle
“Discover your skin triggers”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “skin”.
First paragraph is 41 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 307 characters.
2,148 characters.
Enough substance
2,050 characters.
18 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 61 days ago.
316 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved onboarding”
1 language.
Localised listing
9 languages.
50 MB.
Reasonable download size
41 MB.