Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Pausa: Honest Journal & Coach
Mindsera: AI Journal & DiaryMindsera: AI Journal & Diary
Self-Care for Mental Health
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Honest Journal & Coach”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “AI Journal & Diary”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The Journal That Pushes Back”
Has a subtitle
“Self-Care for Mental Health”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “journal”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 93 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 159 characters.
3,203 characters.
Enough substance
3,900 characters.
10 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
33 bullet lines, 28 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.70 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
20 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
278 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
62 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improvements & bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
12 languages.
42 MB.
Reasonable download size
138 MB.